Punctuation Blog Post

Hi today I'll be showing you my story about Meerkats and I'll try to add as much punctuation as possible because i'm learning to use punctuation in my writing.

The Meerkats

One morning I woke up and looked at the tree. It finally had some juicy fruit on it I quickly woke up the others and started shouting, “Fruit we have fruit.” Everyone was jumping with joy until we seen a vicious vulture. The vulture looked at our fruit on our precious tree everyone screamed, “ahhhhhhhh our fruit.” .We started running to get our fruit I even jumped on the fruit that the vulture had in his sharp claws. Then all my friends held onto my legs so we could pull the vulture down and get the fruit but that didn’t happen. Actually all of us were to light to carry so the vulture lifted us into the air and started to swing around until he hit a wall so I got the fruit that our tree had grown and then yelled, “We have our fruit back.”. So I passed it along to everyone then when my best friend passed back to me I kick it over the tree, “Yay.” My friends shouted but in a matter of time we found out when the fruit hit the ground it had been squashed, “Don’t worry everyone we’ll see if there will be fruit tomorrow.” I said “Waaa” Sobbed the Meerkats.



If any of you viewers seen some punctuation that I missed just comment down below.