Re-Write my Speech

Well that’s exactly right - the colour of a young woman’s skin made a salesperson think a customer was going
to steal from her shop just because of her skin colour...and this happened right under our noses here at The Palms
in Christchurch city!

Well that’s exactly right - the colour of a young woman’s skin made a salesperson think a customer
was going to steal from her shop all because of the colour of her skin ...and this happened right under our
noses here at The Palms in Christchurch.

To support people with disabilities I think our country needs more walkways and things just like that so that
if they are in wheelchairs they have more access the buildings, cars etc.

To support people with disabilities our country needs to make more accessible things for disabled people like  
more walkways and things like that so that if they are in wheelchairs they have more access the buildings, cars etc.

Now for my third topic I will be talking about sexism. Sexism is mostly someone thinking that a woman or
a man can’t do a certain job because of their gender.

Now I will be talking about sexism. Sexism is mostly someone thinking that a woman or a man can’t do a
certain job all  because of their gender.

Sure it might be better now but still woman don’t do most jobs men do like trades and a lot more.

I guess women can now vote but still woman need to get persuaded to do the job that they love even if it’s a job that they think men are better at.

Sure it might be better now but still woman do not get  most jobs that men will get do like trades and a lot more. I guess women can now vote because they didn’t use to but still woman need to get persuaded to do the job that they love even if it’s a job that they think that men are better at.