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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Writing feedback

Hi guys welcome back to my blog, today was the first day of our online school while in lock down at our houses. Today for writing we had to get a piece of our report and place it into a doc. then you would have to give somebody else's writing good feedback but also help them if they got anything wrong with their writing. After we had done that we would then go back to our piece of writing and improve it then we would also thank the person that gave us the feedback ... this was the piece of my writing that I had done down below...


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1 comment:

  1. UnknownApril 20, 2020 at 1:47 PM

    Hi Jack
    I enjoyed reading about Taika. Imagine if you found your best toy in a rubbish bin. He obviously made the most of what he had. Are you enjoying working from home?

    Steve

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