This week for writing our goal was to Create content that is concise and relevant to the curriculum task .Selects words and phrases to enhance meaning and/or mood. I then wrote a paragraph about poverty and how this is not right. This is my paragraph....
$1.90 a day. Imagine living on $1.90 a day for the rest of
your life. People in third world countries have been living on
this money maybe even less since they got into a Job.
These people getting underpaid in these countries are also
working way harder than half the people in first world
countries. For jobs they have been having to harvest food
and find water and then sell it to other people. With the
money they plant more crops to get more money, but still
after spending the money on crops they have barely enough
money to provide their families.
Have you heard about poverty before ?
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