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Wednesday, June 10, 2020

Writing

For writing this week we have been working on our sentences and especially our comma's. My friends and I then wrote a play that had complex sentences I will now show you the play.


As the two had a fight they hugged each other
Leo: Is that us? 
Ethan: All goods 
Leo: You swing first 
Ethan: You wanna bet?
Brent: Oi look there is a scrap over there. Let's watch.
Arie: Comma
Jayden: We truly are the greatest of friends, Group hug!
Arie: Yes I agree we are the greatest of friends to have ever experienced friendship.
Jack: I love you guys
Jayden: Garlic Naans on me
Ethan:Let's go jump them leo
Arie,  Jayden and Jack: *hug*
Jayden: Where we droppin boi’s?
Jack: oh no here we go again


Arie: Remember that play we need to make? we should do that now
Jayden: The sun rose
Jayden: the sound of fists colliding made me wake up hungry for blood.
Jack : Ethan woke up Comma  I wanna Scrap Leo behind da Hall 
Ethan: Brent gets out of bed Comma Decides to slap Arie in the Mouth
Brent : Ethan gets out of bed  Brent decides to get up at the same time but at different houses.
Arie: why do you smell like fish jayden?
( Jayden tried to hit ethan sandys on the head misses, gets him back. )
( Jack splits them up and gets drop to the ground by Brent )
(Jack dies)

Have you ever wrote a play before?   

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