For writing this week we have been working on our complex sentences. We then had to write a quick story that had 200 to 350 words and that is when we had to finish. I will now show you my story witch is called " The Octo-Hunter" I hope you enjoy.
The Octohunter
As tourists are walking around the beehive they realise that something is moving mysteriously out of the water but they thought nothing of it. 2 days later , more tourists noticed something in the water so they organized some local scuba divers to go down and have a look at what was happening, When the scuba divers went into the water they never came back up. This then got brought to New Zealand's prime minister Jacinda Ardern, she wanted to confirm that something was in there without someone going into the water so she brought a waterproof drone so she could use that.
Jacinda got her I.T man to come down and fly the drone for her and that's exactly what he did. When the drone was in the water it couldn’t spot anything until a cute little octopus came out from nowhere so they just wanted to go back to land until they were flying the drone out of the water. The cute little octopus got lager and lager and completely ate the drone. The octopus then vanished and Jacinda needed a plan to defeat this creature, She then decided to call it the octohunter.
Crash, Boom the octohunter came straight out of the water and headed straight for the beehive, Jacinda had to think quick and push down on this red button that knowone knew what did but it didn't do anything. Jacinda said “just sit back and relax” The octohunter then tackled the beehive and a gigantic bee came out of it Jacinda told everybody “She called it the attacker bee” The two monters then destroyed each other but the octohunter had to get back to water and quick. But the attacker bee thinked quick and got its stinger and went straight into the octo hunter forehead and he blew up into 1 million pieces. Jacinda knew that nothing could beat the attacker bee so she tld Simon bridges if he ever was in a bad situation just click a red button.
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